uh a haiku amazing! sadly i can not give you any feedback on your style-.-^
also my condolesences for your loss.
best regards
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“Show me a heart unflattered by foolish dreams
I’ll show you a happy man,”
But, only in their dreams can men be truly free
Twas always thus, and always thus will be
- Keating
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heads up this is one ahs really bad form…
so you migth as well siKIP IT
you ahve been wanred here goes nothing
my soul is crying tears of joy.
i have felt how i am growing
i see how i learn
my benefits grow tangible
the struggle feels more rewarding
but i still feel quite lonely.
i feel light for i am beeing seen
howver the weight of my misaktes still pulls down on me
there is some joy in my renewed aproach of kindeness and empathy
there is a degree of relief in knowing that there are benefits to my struggling in therapy
but still i feel quite lonely
there is lonelynes in my heart
that was created
when i abandoned my weeker part
but reconciled
i hve found a better, easier path
but still i feel quite lonely
despite all the effort that i put in
one may keep feel lonely
when no one is sharin
the hapnes that found when caring
for all parts within
the freedom after the the war is ending
but still i feel quite lonely
for i have stuggeld boldly
i ahve caused many wounds
i ahve torn many roots
now i found my self deep in the woods
now i see a cord leading e out of my darkest moods
the lonliness lingers
but that is okay
i now know my way
i will keep searcing for flickers
and if need be burn the woods to cinders
i now head towards integration
for this destination
is my chosen salvation
now i feel a little less lonely.
P.S.
i know this is gruesome but i needed to get it out of my system
ty for reeding
bests
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Apparently i lost my mojo xD
Do not bother with this i simply can. It delete it but I am not proud of it…
Here
I feel despair,
Again I am alone
Again I feel the void
Again I just want to avoid
The feeling that my life is wasted
The time I have chased it
The distraction from pain
The feeling that i am.bothing but a stain
On my people’s history
That happiness will remain a mystery
I am.sitting here
O birthdays eve
I and I try to conceive
What to do
Where to go
What skills to develop
Try to fill my life’s envelope
Life is all about joy
But sometimes there is misery
But also cameraderie
I feel quite abandoned
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Who has the confidence to rhyme against me
The poet who rules over eternity.
For time has no bounds
Since my cannon never runs out of rounds
It is possible to say
These poets are on their way
To greatness one day
Before I return another round to play…
But when that day arrives
I shall give them a high five
For success and greatness are not from within
But the result of those who conquer this sin.
And why shouldn’t they win
And receive their bottle of gin
As their work has given them their Efforts Gold Pin
So besides my new ride
A Honda with a hybrid inside
Let’s tap no more to fap
And rap some more
So the poets can happily hap
Their bunny snaps
To rise with wings that forever strongly flap.
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Just say me…when you will go…
It hurts when you shoot me with your bow…
I’m neither living nor dying oooo.
Just say me when you will go??
Tears are coming apart oo…
The perfect is getting to worst ooo…
The pure is getting impure ooo.
Just tell me when you will go…?
Nobody talk to me…jus go…
You are the only one who talks to me ooo.
You make so promises…
But not make a single one ooo.
When you will go…??gooo…
You are just showing me false…
You say that’s heaven…but nooo…
I just going to hell…ooo…
You are bad…ooo
When you will goo??
Please Leave me…
Please Leave me…
Leave me…
Please Leave mee…
When you will go…?
The day I die…?
I sometimes think…
What would my life had been…
Such a great…
If I don’t believed you…ooo
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The void burns
the void hurts
my thoughts are chasing
my focus constantly evading
the work to be done
another hurdle to overcome
do i really want it?
do i want to pay the price?
do i stick to my own advice?
do i really want to escape this vice?
do my effort and willpower suffice?
or would i rather quit and submit?
evryday i need to remember
that i choose to feed an ember
that consicts of enjoyment
and helps me stay buoyant
it is fed by hope and desire
i hope to be my own better
i desire to shine so much brighter
to proudly wear my skin and attire
to wield peoples attention
to find partners to join my ascension
hearing these words of passion
i wonder where lies my goal
where am i heading since beeing a foal?
what is the aim of my action?
i want to surpass my depression.
i want to develop my artisitc expression.
i want to create an authentic impression.
but these are just steps to wars ascension.
A life of happines and joy is abstract
i need to be more specific to make this a fact
currently i am still searching for my motivation
now i will search for it with a tad more elation
for though i know the way
i am afraid that without a goal
i will forever stay
an incompetent foal
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I edged!
It was late at night,
under the demons fright,
I took my hands to the nether…
nor did I remember that it wouldnt be for the better!
My mind under the dangerous illusion,
continued its persuasion
and uhh…
I Said NO!
I immediately stopped ,my heart throbbing
I got out of the sofa gropping
I decided to study for a while,
until my mind started to quile.
Decided not to push on
In the morning soon after waking
gets my slow heart gets racing…
Its smells sweet but its all wet
I though it was a dream wet,
until I learnt that I Lost my bet!
Demotivated , highly concerned
I wondered If I had really learned
The demon said -
“Go ahead one more time, anyway Day zero!”
So did I listen to him, and found myself far from Hero!
Why should you relapse after a relapse?
Every min counts! not every day!
A relapse doesn’t bring you back to the day you started this
ITs better you work harder and find yourslef in true Bliss!
Then I put up a strict rule-
“If I relapse I would walk nude on the terrace,
even though it would be a ton of Embarass…”
@SirTryHard Done with my punishment!I didn’t see it as one!But it was a learning on how stupid and childish I was!
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Yoooo it’s open again!
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Trigger warning sex talk
I feel empty
I think dread
I’m in the eye
Of Hurricane head
Caught in a net of my own creation
I am crying out with desperation
I try to do right to avoid pitfall and sin
Yet i cave to a simple spontaneous whim
Today i feel into a familiar pit,
I went and purchased a hit,
Today I went to a prostitute
Even when despising the pillars of this institute.
We had sex, i felt some pleasure
Yet no relieve
Probably to much pressure
She is nice and cunning
A beauty indeed
Yet she could not quell my need
I left tears almost running.
When arriving home after the act,
I realize the situation was perfect,
I found her profoundly attractive,
Hence at her side i was quite actice,
And yet i could not finish and could not relax,
Due to this impotence I feel sad and perplex,
Rhyming atrociously
Crying desperately
Not knowing what or how to be
I am lost in a desert of my own making,
My endurance begins flaking,
I will keep walking the path that i paved
But I realize of what I am depraved
Hungry for love and affection
Yet ignorant of appropriate action
Thank you dear read for reading this,
Even though my rhymes and rythm a very amiss
But simply knowing somebody might read this
Helps me recovering my facilities
Bests Sirtrysalot
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Nice work.
I too have this poetic skill.
Perhaps I will share soon.
As my power of will
Never seems to bloom.
My 2 days reset is always the same.
I have been stressed
In Life’s horrible game.
I finally found work after 6 weeks of none.
And like God’s creation
My 7th became a restful one.
I am learning well in my new job
Yet I can’t escape this PMO facade.
It is time for me to learn
How to handle whats to come.
Yet the urges yearn
For me to remain dumb.
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