This topic is awesome.
It reminded me of the movie dead poets society whose ending was a little troublesome.
I am not a poet, never had been, I used to suck to make a rhyme scheme, but I will try and join the team.
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that would be great the more the merrier!
and tbh i do not thnik everything here ahs to rhyme 
i fail at it too 
it is just intersting how some stuff one can not express in so many words comes out if you think of maikg it somehow systematic or think of expression as art… somehow that rely opens up may mind and i udnerstand better what is happening i knwo a view ppl who perceive it the same way. i hope you will have fun 
yeah and i also thought of the movie after reading some of the posts that is why i changed the name
i hope it grows into sth beautifull. it already si enjoyable to read what everyone writes… even though some of the stuff is dark but that is jsut a shade of art
ty for joining
bests!
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so as iam a technological novice here;) i somehow am unable to open you post
any hints?
you got me curious now!
bests
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Bro I have not written anything just wait…I have somework after which I will…
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its the start of a new day
my thoughts and patterns
still feel the same
for my feeling of stuckness
the lack of growth
i feel a great deal of shame
here is how the story goes:
i wake up, feel cold
want to stay in my sheats safe hold
in my drowsy mind
the daily challanges start to unfold
especially an aversion to start the grind.
than i remeber the failures of old
i am no longer blind
i ahve seen a path to gold
i am still developing my daily routine
due to my starvation for dopamine
the path that i know is one of trial and error
even though abstract this will lead me away from this terror
i jump out of bead and go get some breakfast
and start top work down my checklist
this day will be one of success and achievement
i refuse to keep up my maltreatment
bests
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Our time has arrived, to step up forward.
Finally leave, this painful jailyard.
Lessons are learned, graved into heart.
We’ll make it trough, no matter how hard.
Facing the truth, makes us alive.
Hate is the past, in front there is love.
Forget the meanless, no point to hold.
Forgive the hurtful, don’t be a fool.
Change is the future, change is our life.
Heaven awaits us, hope makes us fly.
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that is some thing 
ty for sharing!
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I wish this is a dream…
How can I be what I am…
I never wanted to be
what I am…
Just now I have seen…
What I have became…
Just now I have seen…
What I am…
My heart is broken…
Just by seeing myself…
I just wish,
I wasn’t what am now…
But now,I know this…is…not…a…dream…
I will fake it up…
Break it up…
I will…my will…
Just for the respect I had…
I will getup…
And go for a walk…
Out of my life…
So that the day I will die…
Atleast someone will be to cry…
As If I keep going as I am now…
Nobody will cry when I will die…
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Damn bro 
You can do this, we are with you.
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The force,I had…
The power,I had…
The strenth,I had…
The will,I had…
Is gone !!
The beauty,I had…
The smartness,I had…
The mind,I had…
The love,I had…
Is gone…!Is gone!!
Just what remained…
The lust…I have…
The regreat…I have…
The tear…I have…
The pain…I have…
Everything else…is gone…!!
Where…?
I can’t find…I am crying…
Where??where??
If you now then say…please…
Over the moon…
Under the see…say.please…
Over the mountains…
I just know…
I have to…
Find them all…
Where??where??
Where??where…
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I am here to live
I am here to strive
I am here to go beyond sturvival
I am here because I choose this trial
by the cold i am freed
by my effort i will succeed
by beeing vulnerable i can learn about my need
and learning from my past mistakes i will not concede
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Carpe diem
Seize the day
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Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
I can’t rhyme,
Banana.
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Write sth about savannah!
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Nice
Fire is hot,
Bananas are yellow,
Godless women don’t care for your soul,
Pmo makes you mellow
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We are humans, that is our way
We can’t go straight 'fore we go astray
We can’t go high before we’re low
There ain’t no fast lest there’s slow
We can’t get stick without both ends
Although an actor can pretend
You could be saint and never sinner
With no mistakes, eternal winner
But who do you fool? Colleagues? Your friends?
Within your mind fool’s play has ends…
Or has it? We fake it all the same
Before ourselves we have no shame
And yet some will shoot for the stars
Despite them being oh so far
Let’s hope they reach them, shine the light
For all of us so far behind
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Standing on my desk
Epic
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A great one ty for sharing!
And great message!
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My first try at haiku, in memory of someone I might have been acquainted with if not for her being gone.
If there’s anybody from Japan, I’d appreciate confirmation of my approximate translation back to English…
秋の時
紅葉は落ちる
静けさに
In the autumn time
Crimson leaves are falling down
Into the silence
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