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Well for those who know me, its not a secret that I enjoy writing greatly. I have written serveral poems, stories and journey notes which are scrambled all around the internet and across all sorts of stationaries in my house and probably in sewage treatment plant.

I do not want them to be published for I never wrote them for monetary gains. But now after losing most of my work already, I do feel the need to conserve them and organize them in one place. What better place than this site, where people can take a break from usual chats here directed on one topic and enjoy something rather usual but different.

So to benefit both of us, I’ll be posting one of my works here in one form of one post regularly. I hope you guys will enjoy it. I’ll be posting my first story soon here, which is my most recent work , having not been posted anywhere else yet. It does draw a bit of inspiration from the book “To kill a mockingbird”, but it is still quite different , and you’ll understand it once you read it. I’ll try to keep it short, so forgive me for its rushed nature. Awhole novel can be written from it, but I want it to be readable here in form of one post so… Posting soon.

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Echoes in the Mountains

In the serene town of Shimla Hills, nestled amidst the northern Indian mountains, Parantak Sharma lived a life of quiet reclusion. Known for his shyness, awkwardness, and introversion, Parantak had always struggled to connect with others. His deep, unspoken love for Meera Singh was a constant source of anguish. From the deepest corners of his heart, he adored her—her laughter, her grace, the way her presence could light up a room. But his lack of confidence and awkward demeanor made it difficult for Meera to see beyond his exterior. When he finally mustered the courage to express his feelings, Meera, unable to reciprocate, gently rejected him. The rejection, though kind, crushed him, leading him into deeper isolation.

Unable to meet his family’s expectations and grappling with his unfulfilled dreams, Parantak chose to retreat further from his old life. He moved to Shimla Hills, hoping the distance would help him escape the painful reminders of Meera and his own perceived failures. His modest home, secluded from the town’s bustling life, became a sanctuary of solitude and silence.

But destiny had other plans. Meera, now a young woman about to marry, visited Shimla Hills with her father. Their arrival coincided with a brutal crime that shattered the town’s peace. A group of privileged youths—children of influential families—viciously assaulted and murdered Meera. The perpetrators’ wealth and influence shielded them from justice, while corrupt police officials, eager to protect these powerful individuals, falsely accused a group of impoverished laborers.

Parantak remained in his cocoon of isolation, oblivious to the tragedy until a few days later when the details of the crime were reported in the newspaper and broadcasted on television. The news struck him like a lightning bolt, extinguishing the last flicker of light in his life. The memories of Meera, once a distant ache, now flooded back with renewed intensity. The peace he sought in his reclusion was shattered by the screams of the mob outside his home—angry voices driven by misinformation and grief.

Parantak’s anguish and despair drove him to confront the chaos. Summoning his courage, he stepped outside into the turmoil. The mob was violently attacking the Srivastava residence, believing the family to be responsible for Meera’s murder. Parantak, his heart heavy with grief and love, called out to them, his voice trembling but resolute.

“Stop!” he shouted, trying to be heard over the cacophony. “This violence will not bring Meera back or grant her justice. It will only deepen the wounds and dishonor her memory.” His plea was initially met with resistance. The mob, fueled by anger and misinformation, continued their assault.

Parantak’s voice grew more impassioned as he spoke. “I knew Meera deeply. I loved her with a sincerity that only those who truly care can understand. My love for her has been my only companion in this darkness. I withdrew from the world, hoping to forget, but now that she is gone, I am left with nothing but my grief. Meera would never want her memory to be marred by such violence. We must seek true justice, not through destruction but by fighting the corruption that protected her killers.”

His words began to cut through the mob’s anger. They started to see the truth in Parantak’s grief-stricken eyes. Kulbhushan Singh, Meera’s father, overwhelmed by both his loss and Parantak’s heartfelt plea, collapsed in despair. He fell to his knees, sobbing uncontrollably. “Meera! My beloved Meera!” he cried, his voice breaking with the weight of his sorrow. “I have failed you!”

Parantak approached Kulbhushan with compassion. “Meera’s memory deserves better than this,” he said softly, his own voice choked with emotion. “I loved her more deeply than anyone else could. I chose to live far from the pain of her absence, hoping she was happy. Now, with her gone, I feel lost. But I know she would not want her father to be consumed by rage. She would want you to find peace.”

Moved by Parantak’s sincerity and the dawning realization of their mistakes, the mob began to disperse. Kulbhushan, still sobbing, took Parantak’s hand gratefully, finding some solace in his words. Parantak helped him to his feet and guided him away from the chaos, ensuring his safety.

Despite Parantak’s efforts, the system and society failed Meera. The privileged youths who committed the crime were exonerated, their wealth and influence protecting them from any legal repercussions. The falsely accused laborers were sentenced to capital punishment based on a widespread false media narrative created to shield the real culprits. Their families, now vilified and destitute, faced brutal consequences and were forced to live in abject misery.

Kulbhushan Singh, heartbroken and disillusioned, renounced the worldly life and faded away into obscurity. The town of Shimla Hills fell into a mournful silence, its residents subdued by the weight of the truth and the corruption that had pervaded their lives. The Srivastava family, though defeated, remained resilient, praying for the salvation of Meera’s spirit.

Parantak, overwhelmed by the persistent injustice and his own inability to find peace, felt his despair deepen. His love for Meera had driven him to act, but the corruption and failure of the system left him feeling powerless. Unable to endure the weight of his grief and frustration, Parantak sought a drastic resolution. He procured illegal arms from underground sources and stormed into a nightclub where the privileged youths were celebrating.

The nightclub, a symbol of their indulgence and impunity, was a stark contrast to the suffering outside. Parantak, driven by a sense of finality, opened fire on the revelers. The chaos erupted quickly as bodyguards and club security responded, and Parantak was shot in the back. As he fell to the floor, a sense of grim contentment washed over him. With his last breath, he smiled, finding solace in the belief that he had finally made a statement, even if it came at the cost of his own life.

The nightclub’s opulence and the lives of its patrons continued, but for Parantak Sharma, the struggle ended with a silent resolution. His final act of defiance, though marked by tragedy, became a poignant symbol of the battle against corruption and the quest for justice.

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Wow so nice brother :clap: :ok_hand:
Hat’s off
It was so well written
Enjoyed reading it

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It was actually written as a screenplay for a show our group was planning back in 2023, when things fell apart. This is a shortened version created using chatgpt lol. I had written a few other screenays as well , but they were either in “Hinglish” Or “Hindi”, given our majority audience… Maybesomeday I’ll translate them and post here as well.

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I really think you should consider publishing your stories. You’ve put so much time and effort into your writing, and sharing it could not only earn you some money but also help you reach a wider audience. Your hard work deserves recognition!"

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Yes I will… Though I have already lost most of my works but I still have a collection of several of my stories, poems, plays etc. After I become free, I will edit them well and send for publishing. I also have other plans in mind, as my own life has been nothing less than a philosophical novel itself LOL. But first, I am going to be someone who is desirable to publishers as well. I have been rejected previously after bring told that subjects of my works are out of business, nobody reads them lol.

Ye toh sach ha bhai lekin tum inhe apni voice dekr YouTube pr padcast ke tour pr bhi upload kr sakte ho .

Bhai I’m currently very lazy. Padhne me hi time bit jata hai, ab yt k liye pehle recording karo, fir editing karo, fir upload karo :yawning_face: . Itminan se sab karenge. Tab tak bass ikattha kar de rahe hain ek jagah.

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